1) You are writing a story about a girl choosing a prom dress. You have written the following sentence for your story, but you feel like it needs revision. Sheryl looked and gazed at herself in the mirror, and the vision took her breath away. Which is the best revision of this sentence? A) When Sheryl gazed at herself in the mirror, the vision took her breath away. B) In the mirror Sheryl looked and she saw herself and thought she looked like a vision. C) Sheryl looked and gazed at herself in the mirror, and the vision took her breath away. D) Sheryl looked and gazed at herself in the mirror and she liked what she saw in the mirror.