CAN SOMEONE CHECK OVER MY WORK. IS ALL OF IT CORRECT IF NOT WHAT ARE THE ERRORS THAT NEED TO BE FIXED THXXX My work is based on the poem

CAN SOMEONE CHECK OVER MY WORK IS ALL OF IT CORRECT IF NOT WHAT ARE THE ERRORS THAT NEED TO BE FIXED THXXX My work is based on the poem class=
CAN SOMEONE CHECK OVER MY WORK IS ALL OF IT CORRECT IF NOT WHAT ARE THE ERRORS THAT NEED TO BE FIXED THXXX My work is based on the poem class=